In the draft resolution, paragraph 5.7, replace the words:
"the continuing concerns regarding freedom of the media; the pretrial detention of members of parliament following the lifting of their immunity in 2016; the repeated violations of freedom of expression and freedom of the media"
with the following words:
"the continuing concerns regarding freedom of expression and the media; the pretrial detention of members of parliament following the lifting of their immunity in 2016".
For the sake of brevity and avoiding repetition, it is better to merge the mentioned two sentences.