Accordingly, the Assembly recommends that the Committee of Ministers amend the draft convention as follows:
10.1 in the preamble, remove the brackets around “as conferred e.g. by the 1981 Council of Europe Convention for the Protection of Individuals with regard to Automatic Processing of Personal Data” and “Recommendation No. R (87) 15 regulating the use of personal data in the police sector” and add, after this last phrase, “Recommendation No. R (97) 18 concerning the protection of personal data collected and processed for statistical purposes”;
10.2 at the end of the first sentence in Article 2, add the following phrase: “, where that system is protected and recognised as such in domestic law”;
10.3 add the following sentence at the end of Article 3: “These provisions extend to private and confidential professional communications from employees of private firms.”;
10.4 add the following sentence at the end of Article 5: “These provisions extend to the sending of unsolicited electronic mail which obstructs the functioning of a computer system and to unsolicited inclusions on mailing lists.”;
10.5 in Article 6.1.a.1, replace the word “primarily” by the word “specifically”;
10.6 in Article 6.3, replace the words “in paragraph 1 (a) (2)” by “in paragraph 1 (a) (1)”;
10.7 in Article 10.3, delete the phrase “that other effective remedies are available and”;
10.8 in Article 11.1, replace “in accordance with Articles 2-10” by “in accordance with Articles 2 to 9”;
10.9 in Article 11.2, replace “in accordance with Articles 3 to 5, 7, 8, 9 (1) (a) and 9 (1) (c)” by “in accordance with Articles 3 to 5, 7, 8, 9 (1) (a), 9 (1) (b), 9 (1) (c) and 9 (1) (d)”;
10.10 in Article 13.1, replace “in accordance with Articles 2-11” by “in accordance with Articles 2 to 9 and 11” and add “and monetary sanctions” at the end of the paragraph
10.11 insert a new paragraph 2 in Article 13: “Each party shall take the necessary legislative and other measures to ensure that the criminal offences established in accordance with Article 10 are punishable by effective, proportionate and dissuasive sanctions”;
10.12 in Article 13.1, thus amended, and new Article 13.2, indicate what constitute permissible effective, proportionate and dissuasive sanctions, including deprivation of liberty, and monetary sanctions;
10.13 in new Article 13.3, indicate what constitute permissible effective, proportionate and dissuasive criminal or non-criminal sanctions or measures, including monetary sanctions;
10.14 at the end of footnote 29 to Article 15, add “and the 1981 Convention for the Protection of Individuals with regard to Automatic Processing of Personal Data”;
10.15 Replace Article 15 with the following text: “Each party shall adopt, for the implementation and application of the powers and procedures referred to in this section, legislative and other measures establishing conditions and safeguards that will adequately protect human rights, in particular as provided in the Convention for the Protection of Human Rights and Fundamental Freedoms and its protocols and the International Covenant on Civil and Political Rights. The implementation of such measures shall require independent and effective control, based in each specific instance on findings of fact concerning the crime and specifying the person whose privacy is to be interfered with, with due regard for the proportionality of the specific powers and procedures to the nature and circumstances of the offence.”;
10.16 in Article 16.1, remove the brackets around “specified”;
10.17 in Article 16.2, replace “as necessary” by “from a minimum of sixty days to a maximum of one year”;
10.18 in Article 18.3, replace “users of its service” by “subscribers”;
10.19 at the end of Article 27.4.b, add “, with due regard to the generally accepted guarantees concerning data protection”;
10.20 remove the brackets around Article 27 bis and replace “may” by “shall” in paragraphs 2 and 4;
10.21 in Article 29.7, replace “not less than sixty days” by “from a minimum of sixty days to a maximum of one year”;
10.22 insert the following paragraph after Article 39.2: “Where such an agreement or treaty is applied or relations are otherwise established in respect of the matters dealt with in the present Convention, this shall be done in accordance with the principles of this Convention.”;
10.23 lastly, provide a clear and detailed definition of the term “traffic data”.